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| communist daughter 2002-12-23 ch 1,   | a spectacular closing image - 'throwing himself vainly against the world' - which really ties the rest of the story together. again, a narrative which requires something from the reader, which is a rare and wonderful thing these days. |
| ziggy pop eno 2002-12-18 ch 1, | Good! Very thought provoking, one of the things I love about your writing. Raises some interesting questions--reminds me of Ayn Rand. Nicely done. |