|Reviews for McNamara whom is not loved|
| Kievsky 12/24/02 . chapter 1
Was this meant to be evaluated with "billy please don't smoke" in mind, or on its own?
Lonely, sort of tragic, and the repetition of the words show the dreariness of McNamara's days (interesting how his name isn't capitalized here...hmm...). Still, it seems unfinished, probably because the actual plot points are in the story instead of the poem. This is nice as a background piece to show just a little bit of McNamara's life and a hint of his relationship with Billy.