Inspired something of mine, but it ended up rather insipid, so it ended up in a shredder and a deleted portion of memory on my computer.
Anyway, I don't normally read this particular genre, but I thoroughly enjoyed this one, mainly because you expressed yourself vividly, though I was surprised you made no more direct reference to a broken mirror or the like.
Random thought, but that's the first thing I thought of when I saw the title.
Anyway, another great work, and that'll be the last for tonight, I do hope you're still working on writing more, you have a wee bit of talent there that is rather refreshing.

nice job! what else can I say? You should definitely think of a melody for it.

Awesome! Keep writing!