I know you think it's dead and all, but...do you have a timeline set up? You know, what's going to happen and all. If you do, bet I can help! ^-^ It's such a cool idea that I don't want to see this go to waste. Email me at RUNice1220@AOl.com

Oh, I sense some sort of kinship here... ;)

Oh, very nice. Y'know, I'm really sorry that's all I can say-I'm stunned speechless. (Aw, shucks, folks!)

Gee whiz! This is really sudden and almost confusing. Usually I dislike that in a story, but in here I love it! The last line of the chappie is really pretty much describing the entire way I feel about it-VERY summarizing. Tasty, delicious! I want more.

Wow! This story is really cool! It as lots of description, mystery, and a little bit of action at a fast pace. In that order, too. :) Well, anyway, for your review, I'm going to reply, saying that All the characters have heir little quirks-Sage's fear of blood and gore is one, the fact that Alistra has a quick battle mind when she's normally calm and likes to think things out is another, which is why the Genvi didn't defeat her easily. (Starvation could be another thing in that factor-as well as the whole "play with your victims" thing.) Kinda coincidental, doncha think? Well, anyway, not to blabber on my own story. I love this a lot and can't wait for more action! It's super!

Wow! This is really good, I'm sorry it took me so long to get back to the computer, but that's not really the point. I really like the name of Crescent, and if you do decide to change Bubble's name, one idea may be Daray, or Rhiannon. Just ideas. ^_^ Now I gotta read your other stories! ^_^

Those muses with short attention spans can be problematic. Though, I must say, you are really raking in the reviews for this! I found a copule of mistakes, and some funny words, though you write with a maturity that I have not seen that often. Very good. I love your character interactions, absolutely beautiful. By the way, I think Bubbles is a great name, I, personally, love it. Great job so far. Now I'm off to review more!
~Toireasa

Hm.I don't like the name Bubbles for a boy. Reminds me of the powerpuff girl. I keep picturing her everytime. I agree with everyone else. I can try and think up a name for you if you want. Or if you'd rather keep it that way, that's fine. It is your story.

Btw, Hinduism is what most Indian people believe in. (Indian meaning from India, not Native American). It's one of the oldest, if not the oldest, religion in the world. Just thought I'd explain that.

And trust me on extreme coincidences. It's happened to me before^_^

Ack, sorry for two reviews but I wanted to get that out. Anyway, feel free to email if you want me to clarify something^^

Keep writing. (And don't end this story please!)

*hands over cookie as bribe*

~CT

I tried to review this the other day but the site wouldn’t let me, Nasty site.
Anyway I like your newest chapter, * Does a dance, * I like it, yeah I like it, Hehe.
Yeah, it is a pain having two separate accounts; I still prefer one, all well I think I’ll live.
I’m glad you liked my story When French Fires attack. ^_-

Oh I hadnt read chpater 7 & * and even though you said you quit I understand. I just wanted to let you know it was a good piece of writing like I said in my mail.

You know what "Bubbles" makes me think of? The joke with the kid who says that he was taking a 'bath with bubbles' and it turns out that the girl who lives in the house next door is named Bubbles. I am completely, utterly serious. Please change that, unless you want me thinking that he's being molested. (Or DO you want me thinking he's being molested?) Erm, my suggestion would be to follow the pattern that you followed with Waterfall's name, unless there is a rite-of-passage thing in elven culture that involves a name-change. *shrug* Other than that, I think this is pretty good, and I'm sorry that your muse is distracted. My muse offers to bribe it!

You can't stop here. This fic is really quite interesting. I'm not sure about the name Bubbles for a boy though. Anyway, good chapter. Hope you get inspired ;)!

Please, don't let it die. If let a story die and I will cause you a lot of grief that you never finished it. I know it's hard, but I think that if you finish it and it's crap at least there is something there and it might inspire you to come back to it and write more.

Yay! more story! FictionPress.net scares me.but oh well! ^_^ you wrote and the story's good so that makes up for it!

This is a very interesting story. I like it a lot. It's fast-paced and descriptive. Good luck w/ your muse!