>.> That's sweet! In a slight twisted way! xD

That really made me smile.

^_^

Wow, I love those short pieces that make me smile. Awesome.

Wonderful Story, Loved it

Beautiful. I love it.

Don't you just love the name Darius?

AW, Jackie, AW.

Brilliant as always, darling. God, I love your work. *Cries* I wanna write like you..

i really really like this story.... the underlying erotic flavor was enjoyable as hell, i even like more erotica...good job!

wow...::stares at screen in awe for a moment before bursting into excited giggles:: yea! you did another story, another wonderful story. Thank you for writing!
~ami

Very nice work. Your writing style is smooth and clean. I love how it tells you many things, yet doesn't reveal much at the same time.

*whines* More! Hmmm..yes, that definitely caused an unsatiable desire for more. Beautiful, Jackie. But then again, your writing always is. *grins* Would you hate me if I said that I'm at a loss for words, except for "Wow." -Extremely-wow.