This story made the transition of the character in the story Eadoin really wonderfully. I love that all the characters were at one point reunited and fighting to save another innocent person from being overpowered by evil. I fell in love with Zayn in part one and it continued,because eventhough he was ancient and had done many bad things he became a good person. Alex was really a little weak, but it is true that sometimes you need help to be strong. I loved your story through several sleepless nights, and will read the last book to the series shortly. You write beautifully and really enjoy your style. Many thanks !

Can I just tell you what an amazing writer you are. The way you captured so much feeling and emotion in a few simple words. I have never been so moved by or enjoyed a story so as much as this one. I can't wait to read the third installment of this series. Keep up the good work!!

Every time I read one of your stories...I realize how amazing a writer you are. I'm so glad you mentioned Idande and Eadoin. It just wouldn't have been the same without them. The way you so skillfully incorporate redemption and hope into these dark stories always makes me smile. I always feel sympathetic towards all the characters, light and dark, because you develope them so completely (Yahto for example). You're so thorough in tying lose ends together from the previous story!

Once again, a beautiful story. I love the idea of the meeting of the souls and the adventure is just great. Love the romance, naturally, and the characters are all so endearing. The idea that angels and demons were not allowed to love, and the humans were considered tainted beings because of emotions really struck me. The whole thing was very interesting. I hope that you will finish the sequel to this, since you haven't update since 05 and it's now 07, because I really love your writing. =D Great job so far.

it's a great story. it distracted me from studying! =) love it love it love it~

i can't believe it, i actually finished this whole story in 2 days!

well, all I can say is that... well i loved this story. i have absolutely no idea how i came upon (bad memory, lol) but i'll read the other two.

I mean, hey, this one was good so the others must be as well!

man i loved this story. It took me ages to actually get round to finishing, but im so glad i have, was really incredible.

Wow! This is so incredibly descriptive! I have to admit, sometimes I get a little lost amongst all the descriptiveness, but it really is beautiful! Off to bed now, but will read more tomorrow. =^.^=

Wow, this story was excellent! I just love how it's so dark, and so many bad things happen, but somehow it still has a happy ending! It also feels very realistic. I can't wait to read your third!

Yay, Ilo's back! Ack, Zayn's gone. You gain one, you lose one. After this is all over, I think all of the characters are going to need a nice long vacation.

I love this story, but it keeps tormenting my emotions! Geez. One moment, depression, the next happiness! Poor Asha...Cian's just a wee bit crazy, I think...

I hope Ilo doesn't stay dead! I like him! And how would Asha feel? Yahto's a fun demon, I must admit.

As always your writing is beautiful! I'm so glad I was introduced to these stories. The flow of the word really captures you in the moment. ^.^very fluffy!

since u begged so hard for a thought here it is. zayn's a whole other person from in eadoin. thaz good. this was fantastic and you did a great job. i still like eadoin more. probably will be my fave cus idande is such a beautiful charater. and what is it with u and evil children? i suppose their is soething devastating abt a childlike being full of wickedness. well i'm off to read mikaili. god knows when i'll finish it.

Hahahahahaha! It is so weird reading about Eadoin from someone else's view. And Alex doesn't know any of the story about the new people he is meeting. So weird! Oh well, I cracked up during this chapter! Eadoin's reaction was classic when he came into the room. I seriously laughed for five minutes! Awsome chapter. I know this story is already finished, but I felt compelled to review this chapter. Luv u lots