 Jonny Boy 2003-04-28 . chapter 1so true (no time i got 5 seconds to wirte each review!!) great poem |
 disenchanted lullaby 2002-12-31 . chapter 1powerful and intense. wonderfully woven angst. dark hints in there as well, which is a nice and effective touch. *loves*
~ratty |
 EnigmaDesdemona7 2002-12-30 . chapter 1Oh dear... That was very deep... very reflective, or thoughtful... It truly sounds like you're speaking from experience, and that only makes it better. It seems more real, like it has a better grip on reality. It almost sounds as though it could be a song...
Anyway, great job. I loved it. I applaud thee. |
 DemonesqueX 2002-12-20 . chapter 1Very interesting. I liked it! Gives hope to some who have none, I suppose! |
 Sights Unseen 2002-12-20 . chapter 1Wow! I really like this. It shows how a lot of people feel about life and showing weakness. I'm going to go read and review some of your other stuff. You are awesome - keep writing, I hope you read somethings I've written! Bye --LostWriter0307 |
 DeadFlowingGlowerGirl 2002-12-20 . chapter 1Ok..This is good..But it made me want to kill myself..damn thaT MUST BE DEEP. opps..sorry for the caps..but it was good..just kinda hurtful.ok..keep writing..happy holidays!
~Kris~ |
 Left 2002-12-20 . chapter 1That's really well written. Cutting/sadness is always quite interesting to read about from other points of view. Keep on writing! |