(do you see that girl there with

the lavender irises?

How she sways her hips?

I miss you so)

i fucking love poems with parentheses :p. this was really beautiful and hypnotic. PLUS YOU USED THE WORD SALINE! you are god.

Gorgeous

I don't know what it is about this one. Something just gets me.

I am very attached to this piece.

i like it, but why do all these people have shades of grey for a title. we must all think frighteningly alike

I love that! SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!

GeN!

this drew a question in me, perhaps not at all related to this very rich poem (so excuse me)- why is it that anything that we comprehend as good is relative of sin- isn't that strange

tarnishedoversoul

I love the use of parentheses. Yup, it covers feelings I've known before, and the colors metaphors seem to fit in better than I usually see. Kisses are pewter? Please explain that one.

Oooh, that was really good, Norah. Very beautifully phrased, and the emotions were so perfectly expressed. Bittersweet and lovely.

I love it :-)

Oooh! So pretty! I love this! Norah, you've out done yourself. I really REALLY love this one! It's jam-packed full of lyrical prose, and it's delicate and beautiful, like the snowflakes dancing outside the window... "And you're beautiful because I can't have you". Gorgeous.

Norah...that was beautiful! Please keep gracing with your captivating poetry. . .

i like this a lot, keep it up