Reviews for Assassin of the Night

Kerbi 2003-08-11 ch 1,	Your rhyming is truly unsurpassed. It's amazing how you don't have to sacrifice content or flow and still get it all perfect. I love it.
Linmenel 2003-04-12 ch 1,	Ah bloodlust...Thought is was excellent. Very dark...but exciting too. Gave me chills. Awesome wording too. There's something about assasins and spies that is so...alluring...^_^
Pound 2002-12-21 ch 1,	good words... sometimes it's hard to keep the meaning of a poem when you rhyme every line, but you exectuted that well. ill just start out with i like it, but im feeling critical. ok firstly, you probly shouldn't use the word "mystical" when talking about killers... a pretty word, but killers arent typically pretty. consider "taking a(his)dagger in his hands" cus it sounds like it was arranged for a rhyme but doesnt rhyme all the way. dont leave us hanging! "Seeing the fear in his eyes as he tries to take flight" is unclear cus you go from the victim to he and its confusing. the next two parts are very good, especially the third... i love the whole HE STABS HIM and them its all calm again. well written. ...i was just trying to make it not so... "ah yes i like it... goodbye" feel free to go pick my writing to peices. keep writing.