Excellent work! Not only is the imagery astounding, but the couplets all have a nice rhythm going. Reading this aloud is proof to some avid fanatics that old-fashioned format poetry does have some advantages over free verse.

Squee! I love it! I didn't know u loved space too dude! _ ee, well I give it a 10/10!

Thanks I like this poem myself, actually...

*KG

That was lovely!