nice but i dont like the ending

cool...yet...i have to point out something that has not been pointed out...Dylan (one of the boys) was part Jewish...just a minor detail...i hate critizing so really don't take it too personaily...it's good...

I think this is a great poem, but theres a few little details. Eric and Dylan wernt Racist theres many reports saying they werent, and that they would have killed him even if he haddne been black. And they did care, why do you think they did what they did? people pushed them so far and they did care that people were teaseing and making fun of them costantly. thats part of the reason for the shooting. anyway good poem I do like it, Just thought I'd point those things out.

It's true. But no one cares anymore, and that's why this shit happens.

Wow. You tell em! Thanks for reading my stuff! This is really really really good.

I don't know how you do it Cass. This stuff is brilliant.

I like the twist at the end, yet this is a real subject... And I am very sympathtic, for all of those familys...

Very sad. Makes me kind of sad when thinking of how the parents felt when they discovered their kids were dead.

Very touching! I've written (but not posted) a poem/song about the topic called "(The End of) The Age of Inocence."

All the more meaningful, when I read in this mornings paper of 2 boys arrested for planning a similar crime, and earlier this week two more children killed in school by fellow pupils. People must learn that if they have a right to bear arms, them they have a responsibility to keep those arms out of the hands of children, until they do tragidies like this are doomed to be repeated. Keep up the good work KG

Yeah...the Columbine thing really saddened me. I hate when stuff like that happens v_v. Anyway, thanks for reviewing!

*KG

so sad, so true...really nice...