please please please please please please finish! you're ALMOST THERE! love the story! so please finish it... =]

Okay, so this isn't the normal kind of story I read, but you had a great idea and wrote it very well. I'm not even sure if this will even get to you, but I'm hoping that you've just been busy for over a year and forgot to update. I would love to see an ending to this story. Are you going to finish it? It seems like it's so close to being done. Please, please, update!

please please finish

GAH! UPDATE SOON! THIS IS A GREAT EFFING STORY AND U NEED TO HURRY UP AND STOP MAKING UR READERS WAIT. PPL LUV THIS STORY. ITS TO GOOD TO BE ABANDONED. PLZ.

Please Please Please finish!
Awesome story! Next chapter please!

Wake up! Time to post another chapter! I expect it by tomorrow morning! Hop to, chop chop! Seriously! I'm so drawn into this story, the character development, the crazy drama-- finish!

OMFG!!
YOU CAN'T BLOODY END IT LIKE THAT!!
YOU BETTER FINISH WRITING IT!!
That was awesome. Great story!! Love James he's dreamy. Zack's funny too, even though he is an idiot.

Wow. Brilliant story. I'm really loving this, fast paced, explosive (maybe), totally action-packed... woho! Now I'm starting to sound like a guy but that's beside the point. This story is tops and I really hope you continue this and update soon because your writing style is fabulous!
From A Fictional Angel

Update!

Please, please, please stop beating yourself up. This story is great. The sex seen didn't need to be anything else than what it was. It was short and sweet and thus leaving the romance intact and not taking away from the main story line. I think the story & plot are absolutely brilliant. Your talent shows through in how well this is written. Great transitions form scene to scene. I just really wish you haven't lost all interest & will maybe gain some back with the amazing reviews you have been getting & I hope mine adds to the fuel that will inspire you to fish this story with as much zeal as you began with! Thanks for a great story, I read this in one day, I even sneaked at work to read it ;)

AWESOME...REALLY!

wow. i wasn't expecting that. couldn't you just have max shot her in the stomach or something and have her lose blood? cause uh beating Samantha up was pretyy disturbing -_-

gawd. i.love.this.

Oh my G**! It's not yet finished? what a cliffhanger you have here, unless you want to end it this way?! LOL! I love the adventure that I'm reading if this were a movie I'd be jumping up and down right now!

Gosh! I love Zack but of course James weighs more.