You're right about Emily Dickenson. She is quite cryptic. I really like this poem!

This is gorgeous. I love poems like this; they make my life complete!
I have read Dickinson so I know where you're coming from.
Excellent work!
Diana x

I'm one of those people that don't know Emily Dickinson (yet), but I really liked this.
You're right you know: I re-read the poem a couple of times, and it kinda felt like a different poem everytime... if that makes sense.

This is very well done.. i like it a lot.. makes you think.. good job

Nice! It is indeed Emily Dickinson-esque. Random fact about that authors poetry: most of her poems can be sung to the tune of "The Yellow Rose of Texas."

very pretty, nicely done

Mornie utulie, believe and you will find your way. . .

Cryptic, perhaps. I do agree. I like it, it is a curious style that I enjoy. Keep it up! Makes one think! Bravo!
~Whiro~

That is very true
keep it up.
I hate the fact that original stuff barely ever gets reviewed.
I should know
i've tried a few originals and i just took them off of fanfiction and kept them to myself.
oh well.
Keep writing.