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| communist daughter 2002-12-23 ch 1, | abusewow. even if it is 'outdated', a think for a lot of people (especially me!) that it's a huge eye opener. you've got an incredible mix of pity and disgust, almost two sides to the same story, running through my head. and the use of an omniscent narrator was definitely a good choice. excellently done. |