whoa...update soon plz

I like this, well done. I do think that their relationship has moved abit quickly though - but it works. Please update soon and well done!

:...( so sad

OMG! What did you do to James?

good story you have here.. hope you update it, its quite well written :)

This is really good. You should write more!

i love this story! when are you going to add new chapters?? i can't wait!

this is on my fav. story list! i can't wait for the next chapter!!

I had to read this just cuz it's got the same title as one of my favorite KMFDM songs, and I liked what I read. I feel bad for James...The only downside is, when there's dialogue, you have to start a new paragraph every time someone different is speaking. It gets confusing otherwise and people might not be patient enough to sit through that kind of paragraph. Otherwise, continue! I want them to hook up!

This is cool ^^ please continue soon :-)

Anata no Marron

ah need more must write more

I don't normally like original slash, normally leaning toward RPS and such - but since their names were James and Brian (aka AJ/Brian, my favorite RPS, I couldn't resist! This story was great so far; you have no idea how near to tears I was at chapter two, or what memories it brought back. I'm looking forward to more!

I really like this fic....and I want more! Please.

This is really good!!! Keep it up, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

PLEASE go on, this is very good...........