Ack!this is so wierd. This is my first time visiting fictionPress.It's going to take some getting used to.Anyways, now that I've got that cleared away, thankyou so much for reviewing cat and Turtle. I've only got three reviews *sniffle*, but your review cheared me up!Glad you liked it.
(on to the actual review, maybe next time I'll just e-mail you about all the above mentioned stuff)
This poem is really neat!!I'm sorry I haven't checked your account for a while but I just did and now I'm reviewing!I hve to say though, and i know you worked ** them , but the last two lines don't seem to flow very well with the rest of the poem. It's not the concept or the idea, but the wording and the way it was phrasedd.Maybe if you tried to re-word it, the lines would work better.
-Amberose

*grins* i don't see anything wrong with the last two lines!
i really like this poem - not a genre i usually read or enjoy, this was a very good poem! (*gasps* maybe this means i'll have to start reading more romance oo` ^^) lol
~Lexi

Different from what you normally write, but I really like it. Touching yet not too sentimental. Very nice.

Ta for now!
chrestomanci

*sniffle*Beautiful.Made me want to have emotions again.It's too bad I gave them all away.

That was really beautiful.