Whee! More fluff from you, I see. It's so happy and cheery. I am in love with Death, you see, so I think that this whole "I'm here to make things right" is so sweet. ^.^ Cheers!
I thought the rhyming you did was different and interesting...also the subject matter was good. I like the way death's just kinda saying take it easy cuz I'm coming anyways. Great job. ^_^