good chapter...bit confused on how alexis was talking to the creator one second and suddenly was talking to devon the next second...overall, very good work

wwwwaaah! :) It sounds so Angel sanctuary-ish!

I think the story is enthralling. There are still some flaws like the very mushy part and Alexia not even trying to avoid him, not waiting for him to make the move and show that he feels something for her. Anyway its your story, you make the changes you like not me. CIAO!

Ooo evil. Yum.