good poem

... Speechless the least said. But I think you can write those things. You can think of the reality and that's so cool. You don't live in a lie and false happiness. No, no, don't get me wrong. I really think happiness is the greatest of feelings, but after all, the pain and the hurt are always there, even though we don't see them clearly at times that we're wearing our pink glasses of happiness and security.

Ohh...gosh. this is so beautiful!!! One of the best rain poems i've read. I have one. A rain poem, i mean. we sort of have the same meaning. :) Check it out maybe? Good job!! I'll read your other works. :)

Aw... it's not THAT depressing..... well... maybe a little.... ^_^

Wonderful poem! I really enjoyed it. I love the rain, it washes away everything. i have a similar poem like this somewhere, i dunno. but yours is really good. Merry christmas and a happy new year!

I have a knack for writing depressing poems; I've written a whole collection of them! It's always good to let your emotions out somehow, otherwise they'll just eat you up from the inside.
Anyway...great poem! Feelings captured very well, good use of metaphors, and excellent spelling, and punctuation! Well done!