thats wonderful! a little window into human relationships...two souls in all their complexity barely brushing passed each other like bodies in a dark room...the dewtail of your description is so so good, little things a lesser writer leaves out made significant and beautiful...characterisation perfect even in this brevity. wonderful, wonderful!

Cigarettes are the ultimate cliche in poetry, your prose is unedited, it is a conversation leading to nowhere, it is to the unaided eye a thoughtful work, but it seems you make it up as you go.

Merry Christmas, and go get inspired.

ow.

All the talk about the eyes is just... great...

do you continue these, ever, or do you keep them just as they are?

this could be an end, a beginning, smack in the middle, or just as it is; It's beautiful whichever way. Glad to see you uploaded more.

i really truly adored this - your style is refreshing. i wish i could write like this, in fact.

yours,

ali