Coolio...you can't read my reviews yet because your internet browser is done. I say, "Ha ha!"

On the whole, it looks and sounds very good.

Can I assume that 1, 2 and 3 are the settings of an ideal world.

One question, why does everyone hide?

And another note, it seem to give a feeling that the poem is about the beginning of time and how the world wasted.

It's sad when innocence is destroyed. I wrote something about a girl losing her innocence (not in the carnal way...) and called it Black From White. I definitely agree with you. Great poem. _

It's very very nice and very very good. I like the flow of the poem. -