|Reviews for Destroyed|
| Robs 1/19/03 . chapter 1
Coolio...you can't read my reviews yet because your internet browser is done. I say, "Ha ha!"
| aurias 1/5/03 . chapter 1
On the whole, it looks and sounds very good.
Can I assume that 1, 2 and 3 are the settings of an ideal world.
One question, why does everyone hide?
And another note, it seem to give a feeling that the poem is about the beginning of time and how the world wasted.
| DefianceIsMe 12/25/02 . chapter 1
It's sad when innocence is destroyed. I wrote something about a girl losing her innocence (not in the carnal way...) and called it Black From White. I definitely agree with you. Great poem. _
| Yuki no Mitsukai 12/24/02 . chapter 1
It's very very nice and very very good. I like the flow of the poem. -