disturbingly beautiful.

Oooh, very cool. I like the form. :-)

First of all, I love the form you used in this poem. It really adds to the power of your words. Also, as always, the description in your poetry puts so much emotion behind the poem. Great job!

I very much like the format- it emphasizes the beauty in the words

TO

Norah, this is so beautiful! Ridden with pain, yet beautiful!

wow! this is great...the style is original...i like how you put the various powerful words inbetween each stanza. it gave the poem just so much more depth!

I love the style in which you've written this poem with. two thumbs up.

This was simply superb, I really liked the way you put one word between each stanza.

It's always a pleasure reading your work, so never hesitate to tell me when you post. :)

-Pepsi