Wonderful job! Nice ending note. "I will return"--dramatic and poetic.

~Twilight Starr~

Great piece. It's always good to have hope and believe in something. Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day.

~Twilight Starr~

Yikes! *appaled*...Hiya!...jeez...what a beautiful choice of words! So touching..so deep...wow...speechless here...this is truly gorgous yet so sad...aweseomeness! (do forgive the vocabulary...13 yr-old stupidity). anyway this is really very good...write more! Love, Mia