the warrning is very nice. gotta sift threw the idiots in life. i guess telling them to ** off is the way to go. next time someone calls me a ** i will certinly tell them to ** off. i like it, its got a strong begining.

Nice beginning. It's only the first chapter, and you've already got me hooked.

I'm not sure I like Scarlett so far--"going lesbian" because you hate your ex doesn't seem logical... :/ But she's definitely interesting.

I really like Hermie though. The rant about Harry Potter questions made me laugh, and I like James's character too.

I'll be sure to check back when you update. :)

Pretty good. Can't wait for more.

great start, when r u going to finish? writers block on this? happens to everyone, but please try and complete... it sounds really good.

Heyi cant wait to read more i think its goin to turn out great. keep writing.
~GEMINI

Yo! When're you gonna update this?!

Oh... good story.. you should continue it.. :: nudge nudge::


please?



Puck

Looks like it's gonna be great. Update, please, update...*on knees begging*

Very promising. Finish it.

UPDATE!.please?

I really like this story so far. The plot isn't quite developed yet, but the beginning is good. I just want to complain tht you didn't describe the any of the characters' physical aspects. Now I'd like to say UDPATE SOON PLEASE!! ^_^

Aw, Razorblade! I likes this one. I really doubt that I should use the word "sweet" for this, but it comes off that way. Despite half of the dialogue... I think its sweet. You still need to work on Cigarettes, but do this one, too. You know I love your stuff^^ And I got a little acknowldegement in your profile... Thankies!! *hugs* Tis lovely. *is too lazy to do that in hers* I just say to read the stories of people on my fav authors list... o.O What can I say, tis wuvely. Keep writing THIS one! AND cigarettes!

~_^ Alira

I like this story! I cant wait to see how they get together.

This is going to be good. You must hurry and write the next chapter!

But you mustn't forget your other stories!