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| the nerdy 2007-04-16 ch 1,  | abusethe warrning is very nice. gotta sift threw the idiots in life. i guess telling them to ** off is the way to go. next time someone calls me a ** i will certinly tell them to ** off. i like it, its got a strong begining. |
| featherlight 2004-04-14 ch 1, | abuseNice beginning. It's only the first chapter, and you've already got me hooked. I'm not sure I like Scarlett so far--"going lesbian" because you hate your ex doesn't seem logical... :/ But she's definitely interesting. I really like Hermie though. The rant about Harry Potter questions made me laugh, and I like James's character too. I'll be sure to check back when you update. :) |
| Paichi Hakubi 2003-12-28 ch 1, | abusePretty good. Can't wait for more. |
| suicidel angel 2003-06-17 ch 1, | abusegreat start, when r u going to finish? writers block on this? happens to everyone, but please try and complete... it sounds really good. |
| GreaserTeaser13 2003-06-05 ch 1, | abuseHeyi cant wait to read more i think its goin to turn out great. keep writing. ~GEMINI |
| anonymous 2003-04-10 ch 1, anon. | abuseYo! When're you gonna update this?! |
| demonic-muses 2003-03-30 ch 1, | abuseOh... good story.. you should continue it.. :: nudge nudge:: please? Puck |
| Master Haku 2003-03-25 ch 1, | abuseLooks like it's gonna be great. Update, please, update...*on knees begging* |
| Cheyenne 2003-03-15 ch 1, | abuseVery promising. Finish it. |
| Ace 2003-03-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseUPDATE!.please? |
| Switch 2003-01-14 ch 1, | abuseI really like this story so far. The plot isn't quite developed yet, but the beginning is good. I just want to complain tht you didn't describe the any of the characters' physical aspects. Now I'd like to say UDPATE SOON PLEASE!! ^_^ |
| Lira-chan 2002-12-29 ch 1, | abuseAw, Razorblade! I likes this one. I really doubt that I should use the word "sweet" for this, but it comes off that way. Despite half of the dialogue... I think its sweet. You still need to work on Cigarettes, but do this one, too. You know I love your stuff^^ And I got a little acknowldegement in your profile... Thankies!! *hugs* Tis lovely. *is too lazy to do that in hers* I just say to read the stories of people on my fav authors list... o.O What can I say, tis wuvely. Keep writing THIS one! AND cigarettes! ~_^ Alira |
2002-12-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like this story! I cant wait to see how they get together. |
| Angelic Hooligan 2002-12-27 ch 1, | abuseThis is going to be good. You must hurry and write the next chapter! But you mustn't forget your other stories! |