That's...disturbing. Not to say it isn't good, it is! But that's VERY disturbing. ~shudder~ Red...

NICE! I love it. You write with such talent. I've never seen snow...
-Everknight

That's HIGHLY disturbing. Awesome. The last line is an interesting point.

well what can i say i love blood, so that probably wasn't as disturbing to me as it should have been (that says something doesn't it...? hmm anyways) nicely written, almost hypnotic in a way, perefectly laid out laid out, and the writing itself is magnificent as always.

oh...my...god...that is so disturbingly beautiful that I don't know what else to say...wow
*~Immortal Spirit~*

:: blinks::

wow... that was ... amaizing...

I like that alot. it had alot of feeling in it.. though i have to say i like the way it seems that the person.. speaking? has a slight childish innocence.. very very good... almost.. freaky.. :D


Puck

AAh - my arm hurts. That was great, disturbing, but great. Reminds me of one of my friends...she needs help.

loved it!

That was pretty good. I got a really good sense of imagery from it. You showed the relationship between the person and the knife really well and the dependency the person has on the knife.

The only thing that I didn't really like is how you skipped from "I" to "you", you should of just kept with one. But overall, it was good. Good job.

By the way, thanks for reviewing my work.

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. Been out of town.

Anyway, this... It's hypnotic to read and it does what I often wish I could do--it doesn't flinch. It looks insanity and pain right in the eye and makes them sound beautiful. Goddamn beautiful.

*full body shudder* Wow. That was...incredible, to say the least. I may just be sensitive to this sort of thing, but my arm hurts just reading that. Good job! Beautifully masochistic.

O.O

Lordy, lordy. That was awesome. O.o....

Not sure exactly what else to say...*walks away in a state of shock*

Ooo, that was some creepy ** right there, very deep and emotional it seems. Nice work.

dark, but me likes.

*screams in utter shock* That was more than angst! *rocks back and forth, horrified*

Heavy. I really like it. It's so dark, and I couldn't help but picture a knife digging into my arm. Very awesome.