   firess 2003-09-01 . chapter 4this is an awesome story. is there more? |
| firess 2003-09-01 . chapter 1 "She opened her eyes to see the first pair of grey eyes she had ever saw."
tis had seen. |
 Darwin 2003-04-02 . chapter 4I am impressed...my only complaint is that the chapters are so short. And I can't really call that a complaint.
Well written description and dialogue, and a very compelling story. I hope to see more from you soon, you are now added to my favorites list! Well done and don't stop now!
Darwin ;) |
| Darwin 2003-04-02 . chapter 1 Very good start. I am intrigued already. I very much like your style of writing, it is very mature and well thought out. You really should be getting more reviews for your work! OK, moving on! Keep writing!
Darwin ;) |
 SAngel 2003-03-07 . chapter 4You have a great start to the story! i can't wait to see what you do with it. |
 Karla 2003-02-26 . chapter 4 Hey! I loved this!! its very intereseting, update soon!! =) |
 Alexiana 2003-02-07 . chapter 4I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! Please continue, I really want to know what you have up your sleeve. |
 Wicklowe 2003-01-01 . chapter 2Please update soon!! This is a great fic!
~SolitaryStar |
| Wicklowe 2002-12-28 . chapter 1 Wow... Very good idea here-very orignal! I can' wait to read more! Please update soon! ^_^
~SolitaryStar |
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