This one was sad. I liked it. Good job!

aww so sad, but very good, keep up the good work and cant wait to read more

another one of ur old ones. i like this one too. it's so painful and emotional

This was very powerful too! I loved it!
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Much liking!! Sad...but I still like!

Whoa. I sincerely hope that this did not happen to you. It's so touching, though. You have a certain style of writing that I can't quite name, but I truly love it. Keep it up!

this one is much better than the other one i read. Good job.

This is great jo, yet another point to prove against Souf-up...




Micheal

I like all your poems. I like the rhyming and such.
"If only you could see my sorrows-
If only you could hear my cry...

I luv that stanza and it really caught my attention.

o wow! this is soo sad! it kind of reminds me of your one story i'm reading...
i like how you describe the senses, how he could never see, hear, feel and know. it's really good!
i really like the last lines too!

Ahhh...this is deep, dark and sad.

I like the way it was written...although, I think I'd have liked it more had there been...I donno...more words describing her feeling. I mean, I could tell she was mad, but...I didn't feel that she was mad...make sense?

Hmmm...I guess not. Anyway, I liked it, especially the last line.

Thanks for reviewing me ...now I'll walk away...look at my food prints...walking away now...

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By the way, great story.

very sad, interesting style, good job

Waaaaahhhhh! and here i thought you would be writing happy things!!! especially after u wrote 'the goofy old man and I' or whatever it was called. it was good except for the content, Jo, writing so much angst can't be good for you! Ya whatever.

I think that has to do with your story about whatshername the one with david. then again maybe not, the dates wrong for it to be about that story but it could be!

some books actually have theme song(s) u could to poems! Ya, can ou telled I'm bored? I'm not really interested in you snuggling whith Rat nor the movie the rest are watching...

Whatever,
Merry X-mas and Happy new Year!
Your best friend Briana!

It is a good poem. Very strong and emotional. BTW, thanks for reviewing mine. =)

~GeN!

o0o0o0o!!!! VERY GOOD!!!!!! keep ^ the good work!!!!!!~

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