Good story.
Please, update.

Please, update.

I would like to point out something you really need to work on. Over the course of this entire story, I noticed you use the adjective "crisply" or a variation of it far too much. Now I'm sure the Chasers are very...crisp, but you *could* expand your vocabulary and use more words. Doing the same one every other paragraph is just plain dull. Remember, synonyms are your best friends.

Great series. Becomes more interesting the longer I read it.

I've been hooked from the start on this one. You're really the only author I honestly follow their work...

Anywho, I know something big is building up soon...but knowing you this could go on forever. (which is what I secretly hope) Tho i get the feeling something important will happen with Silver...and not to Kate's liking.

I've only just discovered this. The writing is fantastic, I'm really impressed!

Seriously scary considering the world from the recon androids point of view. The chasers will have a significant challenge here, but the whole problem with self-aware entities needs to be resolved. The girls in chasers seem to be working towards that anyway. The old three laws of robotics don't work so well when you have to go insane to become aware. Glad to see you back on this story!

I finished reading this yesterday, and, since shoujoai.com doesn't have a review system, I'm gonna review here...I love the story! I'm a big Sci-Fi buff, and you added shoujo-ai, which I love to read. Not only that, but the characters are believable, and they seem to jump right out of the... well, screen, I guess. Anyways, waiting on more chapters! ^-^

What is it with you and bars?

Honestly, Shane.

Nice setting, BTW.

Great story, great characters, very cool implementation. Really crooked politics, ah well too many people, androids, things. Hope you keep up with the story.Personal relationships are really well done, but is every woman in it a lesbian or bi? Seems like there are a lot of different names for the unit.Thnaks for sharing!

I have finally discovered the divinity that is shanejayell. i've read your fanfiction before, but it doesn't compare to your original stuff. right now this is my favorite, though Journey's End is very nice. but this one has a great plot. and though it's probably hit the sidelines, i really like the rebellion leaders and the crazy political interactions. it's not going to be a single villain, it's about public opinion, and that's tough to change. convincingly.But come on, Gwen and _Beth_? geezLove it,Al

I've just read you're entire story right through and I must say, I do like it a lot. I must say though there is a certain central female role here which isn't bad at all but literally no male characters seem to contribute alot.
How comes all the main characters are pre-dominantly homosexual?

I really enjoyed reading this story. I can't wait to see the next direction you take The Chasers in. I'm always looking for stories with strong female characters and to read one with a room full of strong characters is refreshing. I think the characters are well rounded and the plot is unique. I also agree with a couple of the reviewers when they suggested you add a main villain. I was disappointed when I got to the end of the story and realized it wasn't done yet. Keep up the good work.

Not bad, nt bad at all!

its a very good story so far
the one thing i want to add is that to have a central villian would go against the story as it is so far, i think you could go a long way without one and i would be happy to read it hope you update soon