Imagination is a wonderful thing, isn't it? Yours rocks!

*bows with respect to Je'Sorto and Della C*

BTW, what do these beasts look like, apart from their tallness and long earness?

O, I like it. There's something raw about this, and I'm not quite sure how to pinpoint it, but its a great feel to the story, a superb style, and it kept me captivated from start to finish. Great job!

sweet, mucho nifto, though it might be fun to punish those fools for leaving him there. of course, they don't know what he'll become later

Yes, this is me. gah, I hate writing reviews for people I've talked to. Well, the names are kinda annoying (do they _have_ to have so many apostrophes?) but otherwise, it's good.

YEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!RM RELATED WRITINGS!!!!!!!1 coolnes dellz!

Very good, keep on working on this and Rising Mind, and ignore all those fools that want more DinD.

Aww, such a poor kid! I like this a lot, and the picture is paints is a very clear one. I can't help but wonder about the language; is it preexisting, or is it one YOU created? Anyway, this is another of your stories I'll have to keep checking! Great work!