I like it alot!

Draco malfoy... *drool* good discriptions!

Awesome poem. I like the rythym, and the dark sort of tone was great. It really reminded me of Draco. Keep up the great work!

I think that was great. I think the child was definatly Malfoy, he leans on insulting harry and I think is actually really insecure. e-mail me if I'm wrong, if its not him I want to know who it was, and to know deeper what you mean if its malfoy.

wow... its good, i like the inspiration for it too!