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| darkassasin2003 2004-04-19 ch 3,   | hey this is a good story and you nedd to wrap the story up i want to see if Jessica live or die it geting good |
| lost-innocence 2003-01-12 ch 2, | Hey JESSICA lol..that reminds me of what we were calling you.. JSSCA...huh... oh well how is PETER heh... you really bumped into him? or were you just making the story more interesting?... hehe, PETER wouldn't be the only one to push you.. HEY! when are you gonna make this more interesting?? get to the hijacking already! |
| DON'T CALL ME NATALIE!!!!!!... 2003-01-06 ch 1, | AAAAAAAARGH!!!!!!! you HAD to call me NATALIE!!!!! i HATE being called natalie!!!! ::stabs joy-- sorry, JESSICA-- with a spoon:: ::gets blood on clothes:: GAH! now look what you made me do! haha. When's the ship gettin hijacked? who's hijacking it? can i be a hijacker? Oh yeah and.... redheads should NOT allowed to be wear red. I mean like natural redheads, not if you dye your head like crimson or something, but normal-hair-color red and real red just -don't- work. ::sighs:: ::shakes head despairingly:: color freak.... ::mutters a bit and goes away:: |
| jade selene 2003-01-05 ch 2, | whoo-hoo, joy! lol. ur story's funny, but itz cool. good job :) at first i thought that the "honk honk" had something to do w/ a goose, then again, i tend to think up strange stuff :รพ hehe can't wait for the ship to get hijacked...wait that just sounded kinda heartless...er...just update soon please :) |
| chibashiru 2002-12-31 ch 2, | No one is reviewing this and I think I know why. |