OOh.. This, I like. It's a really light poem; emphasizes a certain feeling of freedom. Well, that's how I interpret it, anyhow. I hope I'm not too far off the mark. ^^;;

I wanna learn how to fly.

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYA! I am totally hyper from lack of sleep...but anyway, I liked this, I too wonder what it is like to fly...sniff* quite cool, keep it up, and if you reviewed some of my stuff it would mean alot to me... :D
Away!

aww ... i like this poem. if i could have one power it would be to fly ... and perhaps a telekinetic like jean grey on x-men. yeah ok, that was random. anyway, keep writing!
~B
p.s. only 11 more days till order of the phenoix comes out! yey!

God damn you and your uncanny ability to write good poetry! :)

A very good poem. It really brings out your expressions of wanting to be free and able to fly. Continue writing.

* whistles in appreciation* WOOHOO! nice poem Tweak McFreak!! !_! i couldn't make one if my life depended on it, BELIEVE me. mine sux, all of them cause i was morbid when i wrote them. Neways, nice rhymin' nice timein' and nice concept. I like the whole flying thing, fun. When i read it a picture came into my mind, so you accomplished the greatest thing, congrats! * throws a bishie party* I do that frequently, haha... see ya later i got another chap up for Brie!

MM well done. ^_^ BTW RainWalk:The Hall isn't the end, still a ways to go.

You're so good at poetry! Keep writing!

Awesome poem^-^ thanx for reviewing my stuff, and again, AWESOME POEM!^-^

Excellent! Thanks for the review! Keep writing..

In a few simple and eloquent words you captured my dream. Wonderful job. Cheers,

-Michelle-

good poem! thanks for reviewing my story by the way!