w00t! I'm loving these last couple of chapters, Gaz! Really, this is so much better than the first couple of chapters.

Oh, the story, Arosol has been updated. It now has four chapters...you know, "Untitled and Unfinished!". It's fuckin' beautiful!

Omfg...

This story is really messing with my head. I should probably stop reading it, but it's so damn good! It's addictive! Argh...

Well, first of all, teachers don't send you to the nurse for 'being mentally insane.' The principal or the school board would surely not allow a picture of Lauri attacking the school nurse to be put on the front page of the school newspaper. And the nurse would not tell Lauri she was insane and she needed to lie down. I'm actually not sure what everyone would do in a scenario like this-you see, it doesn't normally happen in American schools, to my knowledge-but these seem pretty implausible. I don't know. This story seems a little strange. I'm not sure if I can get into the whole "Lauri-and-Lauri-X" thing.

'Slayer

Huh? Andromeda? Lauri X? I don't know. I do like Lauri, though. She's a neat person. And I guess if she's into drilling pencils into her finger, she's into cutting as well, and all that other quote "Goth" unquote stuff (:D). I wish I had her hair. Me. With electric blue hair. I believe some heart-attacks would be in order.

'Slayer

I didn't really feel it was necessary to review this, seeing as how it isn't really a chapter, but then I read the last line you'd typed: 'Enjoy this story, and remember, temptation is exactly what we can't resist, especially when we don't want to resist it.' That is so very true. I couldn't have put it better myself. Now that I finally have the power to review (I can't usually, only at my mom's house), that's all I should be doing for the next day and a half. Hope this story will give me something to do.

'Slayer

Dude, I'm sorry, but this is FASCINATING. It's not going down an overtrodden storyline, like most of the stories I read (& write). Cool..Gosh, I need to go. But I WILL be back to read the rest, okay?

Interesting. -rubs chin-

Oh. My God. Those poems were amazing. Let's see what's next...

Perhaps it's just because I know you, but here's the real thrill for me in the story: Is that I can find atleast one person in my life that relates to every single character. That you can see things through every character's eye so perfectly, and now matter the character's personality, they always have something intelligent to say-in Cassidy's case, I guess it just justifies her personality. XD
Anyway, some people are not very good at reading into stories that are very subtle. So most people upon first glance would probably think "Oh this story's going to pity me into liking the main character or something." But when you divuldge into the dialogue and explinations behind the flashbacks, it all becomes very clear.
With that said, write more. I love it. I love you. The comic character designs are being worked on but I suck. JD has an aura of fat.

Yo homie! Great chapter! Keep writing man!

I've been a fan of this story since you first published it. And i'm excited to see its a continuated process. Therefore, i'm adding it to my favorites list, you have a really touching talent.

Oh exciting and slightly creepy with micheal thinking he'd killed her. But I guess thats what its like inside a mental place so great work on the atmosphere. ) its getting even more exciting now...

It's good so far but i've been wondering: is lauri x in an insane asylum on earth x?

i really love this story its great! update soon im on the edge of my seat

IT ROX SO MUCH! WRITE MORE NOW!