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| Angerona 2003-07-10 ch 1, | abuseAgain what can i say great work. I knwo what it's like to felt bound and gagged when everyone else is walking around acting so free you know? I like the way you say this may not be the time/ to be hanging by a thread it's almost like your dieing and suffering but you don;t wanna make it anyone else problem. Really great great work. :D ~Angerona the Goddess of Death~ |
| wildtenderness 2003-01-01 ch 1, | abuseIt's a great poem...the words you use,they're so beautiful.i like it;) |
| Forgotten Heart 2002-12-29 ch 1, | abuseDifferent... it's got a sweet/sourness to it. I think it's good. Keep writting! |
| camena animi 2002-12-29 ch 1, | abuseI like the rhythm especially and the ending is great. Keep writing |