Good one! seriously well written. well done indeed. Update when you can-->Eleniel Iluvtariel

:o So awsome!

Every time I read it it gets funnyer and funnyer, but I am sad that the second book isn't up yet, I have been waiting FOREVER! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE get it on line! If you need help typing it I will type it for you, PLEASE! And, I still luv the story!

"JOHN!! NOOOO!!! Now we can't have orgies in the teacher's lounge anymore!!!!" ::shuddering:: That was probably the funniest part. And all the cracks abour ** ** cracked me up. So.... When are you going to put up the next one? I would offer to type it for you, but...hehe...I have been typing All Hallows Eve for 5 months and I am on Chapter...5 I think? Well, I'll finish it eventually.... ~Kelsey

Yummy Cornflakes...what?! it's not cereal!? O yeah, it's the bunny^^;;;

LOL, this story is good. I can not wait for the next one.

Guess who??? HAHAHA!!!!!!! PLEEZ post the next part cause the first two were REALLY good. As a matter of fact, I'm printing it all right now... all 9 pages of the first part and 11 of the second. I am getting ready to read/print the ghost one... *wonders how many hours it will take* LUV YA HUN!! ~Kelsey (aka Ewok)~

Hey Karebear! Guess what? This review went througH! :) Oh for anyone who doesn't know Kara, PLEEZ write a review (Kara was whining... "The only people who write reviews are my friends!") Anyways... The story is SO good!

Luv ya hun!
~Kelsey~

Good story. Finally I can see it at it's whole! If any one else is reading this, yes, I am the Kristy in the story. Why would someone post this though? I really ing sucked! Just kidding it was really good. Karebear keep writting those good stories.(Good but just not great as some writters ex. William Shakspear or John Steinbek)

hey Kara. What about part 3??????????? You gotta post it if its done!! Please? hey im the first one to review ur second story eh? I didn't know keelah was obsessed with the springy pony...... hehehe.......can i be in a story? please? even if it's just a cameo? PLEASE????????? Keep it up! & ill see yah mon!

Well kara im at home now and just finished reading chapter one when i relized something, you changed the name didn't yah, well you forgot to change downtown royal oak my friend, about three times! Example: "Well, I guess if I was a really smart rabbit, I'd go to Downtown Royal Oak. You could get all sorts of "food" there." *ahem* sorry to point out the slip up but oh well. hehehe. Can I be in one of your stories??

Hey kara! Well im at school, 6th hour on friday doin' that gay biology thing on the net so i thought that it would be a good idea to drop by the site and read your story like i said i would. Plus i dindn't wanna be seen reading Gundam by a certan blonde and a curly haired short person *ahem* oh yes, Kelsey & Colleen say hi too. :) Well i should go before the teacher finds me typing on a web page im not *ahem* on. Well about the story....I lOVE IT! hehe it's funny & ill have to come back and read the second part later so g2g! "What me miss calkins? On a web page? No... not me.....really...office? Damn...."

hey great story very funny. you dont have to whine anymore
now you have a review LUv, nIkKi
p.s. sorry hun i dont swing that way ;)