This story was sounding so promising and now it's just..GONE? The downside of hiding your story from pathetic plagiarisers is that the story is also hidden from people who would just sit back with a cup of coffee and actually enjoy and appreciate the story and think about the characters for months afterwards. This is just sad man.

I like this. I would like to read more?

wow i this story seems like it is good! i wish u would post the whole thing!

Hurry you need to expand! :D

you have to post more! i love it

Aw... come on now. This sounds so interesting why stop?

Found a small error though in chapter 3

"You know I’ll never be interested is you.”

Really liking this story so far ;)

Great writing

i hope you continue this.. it's very interesting... :D

Love it! Danny is just so kickass. It's an interesting twist you put on her character, with how she's never killed but is willing to in some situations. Awesome story, I hope you're continuing it!

LLovely!

Great

Are you gonna finish/update this story because i'm just getting into it and I Love the character Danny! She shows that Girls can do what guys can do.

GIRLS ROCK!

Please update!

This story is apsolutally fantastic. Please update soon. I've been checking this story to see if chapter six has come up for so long it's not funny. I love it. Can you please update.

Oh yeah, and update soon! I am dying to know what happens!

Rose

NO... How mean of you... xD Joking. Anyway, I hope you come back soon and finish revising!

Rose