|Reviews for Danny|
| Jamez 6/15/03 . chapter 4
I've read both of your stories and I LOVE them! You're the first person on my favourite authors list and I've been reading other peoples stories for a LONG time on here! I just wish your stories were pubished and in stores so I could buy them and make everyone I know read them!
| esperenze 6/5/03 . chapter 2
awesome write more!
| Alchera 5/31/03 . chapter 4
Well, that was absolutely wonderful. A lot of times, when I'm reading stuff, I'll just skim through it and only read a few sentences. But I read every word of this. I was so upset when I saw that only four chapters were up. Hopefully, you'll add more soon. I really enjoyed this.
There was something I meant to say as a criticism, positive of course, but I forget. I like the way you wrote this in present tense. It gives you a sense that even the speaker doesn't know what's going to happen next, whereas in past tense, everything already happened. It's hard to pull off a convincing present tense, but you did it... and very well I might add.
Great work, I'll come back
| NthNinth 5/15/03 . chapter 4
cute, i like her personality, dont make her fall too hard, it wouldnt be like her
| Lina Inverse 5/14/03 . chapter 4
Nice _ I can't wait to see more peoples' asses get kicked
| DramaQueen77 4/3/03 . chapter 4
I really like this story so far! PLEASE update soon.
| crossed Ts 3/28/03 . chapter 4
Ah, her attitude is refreshing. I mean it doesn't sound as if she is going overboard with her bad-ass kind of attitude. it's just right for someone who has grown up in the bad side of town. good story. vey captivating.
| Wezen Solo 3/27/03 . chapter 4
Ah. A breath of fresh air. I love it! A real creative setup. Please don't stop writing; I'm still reading! :] Great writing, MJ
| Margarita Mocha 3/27/03 . chapter 4
LOVE IT! WRITE MORE SOONER... I love it to death. Screw school work.
| Vana Burke 3/20/03 . chapter 3
Definitely continue I love this!
| Vana Burke 3/20/03 . chapter 1
Wow, this is a new idea. Keep writing!
| soundtrack to screwups 3/16/03 . chapter 3
i like it.
CONTINUE ASAP! OR I WILL H?URT YOU LIKE DANNY HURTS THE ASSHOLE... PLEASE! ASAP! NOW! NOW!
| Lina Inverse 2/28/03 . chapter 2
Interesting. I can't wait for more.
| It all fades away 2/19/03 . chapter 2
That was really good. Much better than my story. You used great description. You write like a pro, no lie. Thanks for the review. If you liked the story check out my poetry. Thanks.
| cbprice25 2/8/03 . chapter 2
It's interesting. You'll have to write more!