WOW IM AMAZED.THIS IS THE SECOND STORY OF YOURS I HAVE READ. ALL THROUGHOUT THE STORY I WAS THINKING TO MYSELF WHERE IS SHAWN...WHY ISNT HE HERE WITH HER.AMANDA AND WHEN IT FINALLY GOT TO THE END I WAS LIKE WHOA.SHES RELIVING HER PAST.IT MUST BE HARD FOR HER

that was...really good. I really felt like I connected with the characters and could feel their emotions. I also liked how you mixed past with present, leaving the reader wondering about how everything turned out until the very end. I would only suggest another editing session to work on remaining grammar and typo problems. Other than that, I love it.

~Padfoot101

i like the thread of sadness that is present in your writing.

amanda is such an interesting character.
i wish there was more description or something more known about shawn though.

it feels like everything is happening really fast, but maybe that's because that's the way amanda is.

this is an interesting start!
i'll definitely keep on reading.

I loved this story!!I didn't think it was going to have a happy-ending but it did!It was a great story!GoOd JoB!!

awwww...such a sweet story...shawn sounds like a hottie too LOL...i like that song...i also thot of writing a story based on it...but i lack the gumption LOL...but u wrote it better than i would have anyway...good job! =P

awwww...such a sweet story...shawn sounds like a hottie too LOL...i like that song...i also thot of writing a story based on it...but i lack the gumption LOL...but u wrote it better than i would have anyway...good job! =P