Sorry I hadn't been back to review sooner. The holidays were insane. I spent most of my spare time kinda working on my own stuff. I'm slow, but I do enjoy reading your stuff. :)

Now, the penalty for curfew is beheading? Jesus Christ. That's frightening, especially considering this seems fairly light-hearted at the moment.

I'm trying to figure out your setting. Your characters have swords, but wear jeans. It's not criticism, but it's a little bit of an odd combination. Not bad though.

I like the interaction so far. I'll be back for more. Hopefully sooner than later. :)