like it. peace.

THERE, I REVIEWED! MUAHAHAHA!! WHO OWNS KIMIA?!?
ME! I SAY, ME! IT IS I, ME, THAT SHALL CONQUER, er...CONTROL KIMIA! lol. hard to think this review is going to be posted on the net. lol. I'M FAMOUS! WEHOO! SORRY PPL, I'M JUST AS HYPER AS ::COUGH:: LITTLE MISS KIMIA HERE.
ANYHOO...NICE POEM! OR SHOULD I SAY...HAIKU... ::duh dun dun::
AHAHAHAHAHA! I CRACK MYSELF UP! not... =) okay the people who are reading this are going to think i'm psycho...JUST like our Kimia here...lol.
well... i think i shall leave you ppl to your peace to think about what i have just said about all this crap that i'm writing. ( i KNOW that didn't make sense...but somehow i just don't know what makes it NOT make sense...make sense? AHAHAHAHA! THAT'S A KNEESLAPPER!! *Kimia: reminds me of ms. strasser...doesn't it?* )
LATER!
P.S. i kinda noticed that all this crap i wrote...is NOT about the haiku...but just about me...and..uhh...KIMIA!!

I pushed the button. Do I get a cybercookie? haha It's another nice poem! You've got talent (and congrats for graduating spelling school!) *wink*

I was never into haiku, but this is nice; it's very descriptive, plays very well to the senses. Peace. :-)

dosn't really stick to the 5, 7, 5 but its nice

Really pretty!!!

~*~2MoshiQ~*~

You misspelled FRIEND when you were typing it out but that's ok. ^_^ Great haiku. Keep up the good work.

I liked it!


~Heart of the Sword

wow...great haiku! great imagery and vivid descriptions! good job! keep writing!

Wow! o.o That was puuurty..... You should do more! :D

Hey, not bad. In fact, it was really nice. Keep it up!

Oh, that was cute. and it was one of the best haikus I've read. but arent haiku's supposed to have 5 words then 7 then 5 again? Or is the seven supposed to be 9? I dunno. Don't listen to me. I'm a just a fool who doesn't know what she's talking about -__-;;; (hehehe)

*pushy finger on review button* huh? *scratches head the looks around and spots mouse* oh! *takes mouse and pushes it up against screen* CLICKY! Haha See it w- . . . . *spots cursor* OH! *Moves cursor with little arrows on keyboard and clicks on button* *box opens up* You really ought to be a little more specific. Anyhoo, nice haiku, very nice. I can relate completely, such a pretty little poem.