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| Freya 2007-11-10 ch 8,  | abuseWow, this is so good! I know it hasn't been updated for like 4years, but I really hope that this will be continued one day. Ida:-) |
| caramel blazers 2006-09-02 ch 8, | abusei like this story, its a shame you havent finished it. |
| worstwriteronfic 2006-05-26 ch 1, | abuseAwesome story! |
| A NonImus 2006-04-25 ch 8, anon. | abuseSo, ah... it's been three years... anyone there? |
| saicho-18 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseinteresting...when i read this story, i kinda got the feel of paolo coelho's novel 'eleven minutes'. i'd like to think that it's for some reason other than the fact that they (your story and his) talk of a prostitute's life but one can never really tell. anyways, i'll be keeping an eye on this one, please update soon. saicho_18 : slytherin ^-^ |
| mary 2004-04-23 ch 8, anon. | abusegreat.. interesting plot... update :D |
| Some Dude 2003-12-17 ch 8, anon. | abuseWow. Why did you stop writing this? Yeah its a little on the raunchy side, but its a wonderful plot. I want to see how it ends! :) |
| MimiGhost 2003-12-14 ch 8, | abuseupdate soon |
| LeeLee 2003-08-13 ch 8, anon. | abuseit's very cool! write more!! |
| JessicaMackenzie 2003-06-10 ch 8, | abuseAlright. I like Maya's last name, it was cool. It's cool though that you guys made Maya sleep with someone else besides Kyle cause well... it keeps the story real. It's interesting. I didn't think Maya had a pimp... LOL... Anyways, when are you gonna post again? I'm gonna read your other story and your story's on my fave story list. Im wondering when are you gonna make Kyle get rid of his fiancé? |
| JessicaMackenzie 2003-06-09 ch 7, | abuseAlright... I kinda lied and forgot to review, BUT I'm doing it now. I like your story, I like how Kyle WANTS to get to know Maya and everything. I think it's a little Jerkyl & Hyde when he calls himsef Koon @ work & Kyle when he's w/Maya. You should though, make the chapters longers &/or include both POV's from Kyle & Maya. I've never seen Pretty Woman,so to me you guys are doing super great. Its summer, UPDATE more, people! Read MY story, Mistery Train. |
| infinitas 2003-06-06 ch 8, | abuseinteresting. this is more original then a lot of other stories. |
| Lina Inverse 2003-06-05 ch 8, | abuseWow. This chapter was amazing, especially the end ^_^ |
| aussie88l 2003-06-05 ch 8, | abuseo.. another interesting characters. this lorent guy sounds like a total pig! do you think you could discribe him at all? attractive? slimy? fat? just wondering. =) good job with her 'customer'. i was almost gagging in repulsion. maybe one day koon will find out that he's desperately in love with her and come and marry her so she can live with him instead. yeah. classic happy ending. I'm such a sappy romantic. |
| aussie88l 2003-06-03 ch 7, | abusewhat an intriguing story!! sorry, but I have to be all useless right now and just encourage you do keep up the good work and leave it at that. ^_^ Hope I have time to write a more meaningful comments next time! |