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Spiky Hair Kid 2003-01-05 . chapter 1
As is the norm with these songs, I love them, I really like this part:

"I'm gonna fall soon and I know it's coming
Don't try and catch me, I'll just keep you running
Farther away from my hopes and my dreams

You've never known me, so don't pretend
I'm no Virgo, I'm lost in sin
I'm spiteful, wrapped up in hatred
They're all out to get me and"

You gotta keep this stuff up, I can't get enough!
Wrong Name Tag 2003-01-05 . chapter 1
Nice song, Obviously not about a nice subject, but very well written. I loved the lines "But most of all I hate my mirror For showing more truth than anyone has ever" Awesome song, great job

-Jessie
Mistress K. Darq-Chylde 2003-01-04 . chapter 1
Again... I love it! It's so sad and truthful... It makes you feel something. That's the way a song's supposed to be. It's supposed to evoke feeling. And these songs... do just that.
what a gas 2003-01-03 . chapter 1
This is a very very very good song. This is up there with the songwriting of the Red Hot Chili Peppers - who I beleive are excellent songwriters.
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