I'm about halfway through reading and reviewing all of these, which means you'll probably get this somewhere in the middle of your e-mail alerts for updates. Honestly, I am so amazed at all of these, they are simply jaw-dropping, just nod your head, keep your actions at a minimum, to appreciate what is really in these. Randi(Mistress Kassandra) is right, if you don't have some sort of record deal or some recognition somewhere, you should really be looking, you have more talent than I think I'll ever have, and I know I'd listen to this, they're so good, below the Review Story thingy it says:

It is extremely helpful to use this opportunity to comment on an aspect of the story that can be improved. A well rounded critique is often the most rewarding tool for the writer.

I just cannot find anything to say to you that is negative right now, it's unbeleiveable.

Interesting song, well expressed. I like the second half of the chorous a lot. Nice job

-Jessie

... Sounds kinda like the current situation between my boyfriend and I.

"Damn!
I guess I don't

Love you like I thought I did
All those hard nights,
Thought-filled poetry
Guess it's not so deep
As I thought it was

Guess I've been lied to all along
Guess I don't love you
I don't love you
After all"

It's scary how well it fits...