This is dark. scary. depressed. when you visit places like this, keep the light of your children and those who love you in mind to insure your safe return. They will always need you and love you, and more so in proportion to the amount of time that passes along this journey thru life. You are irreplaceable. One of a kind. With a uniqueness that can't be copied.

good poem in that it makes a reader think. if i could offer one suggestion, it would be to ask if you could use a few paragraphs rather than the long continous waterfall of words (it's hard on my poor little eyes who are losing their contacts:-)

if i tell you that my email is , will you tell me what the driving force behind the poem was, please?

other than the continous lines thing, i like this poem. the idea of being buried alive intrigues me, but scares me at the same time-guess i'm just too much like Edgar Allan Poe in that regard:-)