wow... this is deep...and so true...

I really love your writing, both here and on ff.net! Keep it up! ^_^

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ObiWanGirl

i can imagine this being read out in a church. you know the even voiced vicar that teaches us about love and God and his love for us and how we should love him. a lesson for us all explaing how it feels.

This is Tohru. Did you think I was insulting you? Sorry but as I said, I was having an off day. I should really stay off the net on those days. I really do like your work however this one was quite different...in a good way. I think this is one of the better originals. Anyway if you need anymore clarification, notify ne.

You sound like my clone...that's not good. I have a checkered journal thing and let's just say 4/5 of it is complete jibberish junk. I don't know what I was thinking...however I've always thought love is a joke...coz it is. Love can be nice or evil...very evil. Sorry I'm having an off day.

So poetic, as usual! ^^ Very awe-inspiring. I'm a huge fan of your works and this is another keeper for the 'Clasics' shelf! Good job!!! =^_^=

I've had thoughts like these *nods* Though... none of them have come out quite as poetic as you have them here. I can really relate to this... Very insightful, and so very creepy at the same time.


Ayod Botla

This is so...awe inspiring. Usually I try to leave fairly in-depth reviews, but I'm not sure I can put it into words. Still, I'll try.

Since breaking it off with my last boyfriend, I've been 'free'. I've also been in and out of the hospital and various mental clinics. Not because of him, no, but I mention this because a) I'm not embarrassed; and b) maybe it will help you see how poignant this was, and how truthful it is for probably every person who has been or will be in love.

This also doesn't describe simply the affection lovers share. The love I have for my best friend keeps me sane, for example. Love is indeed a light even when one feels trapped in shadows.

I really emjoyed this, you've put into words what many people feel. I really liked the part about 'love chaining you' because its so true, you can't go around doing whatever you want if you know that people love you because if you love them back, you don't want to hurt them. I think this applies to all relationships, incl parents, friends, lovers.
If you're clinically unstable then so am I, and so are most people! Thanks for putting this up, its very enlightening, and comforting to know that you're not the only one who has thoughts like these!!
Am xx

Wow.

That was powerful, to say the least.