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| mispeled 2003-04-28 ch 2,  | abusesounds good so far, things are a bit abrupt and seem unexplained. maybe a bit more detail. this sounds promiseing, i'd like ot see another chapter. |
| Master Haku 2003-03-27 ch 2, | abuseFriscoFreeze...m...yummy... I really loved the way you just left us hanging. *waves little sarcastic flag.* UPDATE SOON. Looks like it's going to be fun. |
| whohasthezebra 2003-01-22 ch 2, | abuseDun dun dun? short chapter, kinda a cliffy. I like a lot. Whats going on with Jeremy!?!?! confused..but in good way! update....UPDATE.... |
| moo 2003-01-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt's good. Keep up the good work. Blah blah blah. Seriously though, i think it's a great intro. |
| whohasthezebra 2003-01-03 ch 1, | abuseMwa? This is good start, i wanna see what is going on with this jeremy chap. Wunnerful start. I like the details of the street. |