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Reviews For: Can't Hold On Forever
a e i o u and sometimes y 2004-04-21 . chapter 1
How very depressing. Probably because it triggered memories in my mind. I can relate to this...a lot. Good write =D
Might you R&R some of my work? I'd appreciate it if you did ^^
Shade2 2003-12-11 . chapter 1
Aww, sad (ish). I like your poetry/writing, it's interesting without shoving it down the reader's throat. Not bad, not bad at all.
SoulessFreedom 2003-08-17 . chapter 1
Damn, how old are you again? This was very impressive and moving for poetry. I NEVER read poetry, but for the few that i do read, this is great!

(Btw, cool name...)
Mistress K. Darq-Chylde 2003-01-04 . chapter 1
Sounds like this was inspired by something I told ya, eh? It does hurt to realize that your friends won't listen to you anymore, especially when you're right and they don't realize it.
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