I agree with the other reviewers. Fabulous work. I can't remember ever having read anything on fictionpress with quite this much enjoyment and admiration. More of this stuff, if you please. By the way, the phone conversation seemed to have a distinct Gilmore Girls quality about it, for some reason. Happy writing to you.

You know when I started reading this, the first thing that came to my mind was that this was horribly tripe. THen I continued reading it out of curiosity, and realized that this wasn't tripe but rather amazing writing that wasn't the least bit mediocre but quite intellectual.
By the way, I think fictionpress has a problem with word counts. It put this fic as having only 632 words. I did a word count using msword, and found it to have somewhere around 2k+ words. So, go figure.
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Fantastic. You have a tasteful way of writing, I must say. You should know that at least one writer here envies your talent. The phone conversations were in depth, yet socially shallow. Nice work.

Excellent writing.

Loved the style.

More of the same please.