   theLouvre 2006-02-20 . chapter 14Oh my GOSH!! The surprise was GREAT!! Fantastic job! |
 Raven O'Connor 2006-02-15 . chapter 14Wow, that was a surprise all right. I'm happy that he popped the question. and she'd agreed! Yay! I can't wait for the next installment. Great job! |
| Raven O'Connor 2006-02-14 . chapter 13 Great ending as usual! You really have a knack in writing action-packed stories. Great work. |
| Raven O'Connor 2006-01-29 . chapter 12 Hey, I'm glad to see this story updated again! And wow, what a cliffhanger! I can't wait for you to update the next chapter soon. |
 nat_4eva 2005-11-27 . chapter 11 ur story is so great! im really into it and im always happy 2 c a new chapter up. keep up da great work! i cant wait to read da ending! |
| theLouvre 2005-11-09 . chapter 11 AHH!! I found another Dan Brown-like author!! YAY! Update it soon...suspense is killing me!
~Lira
PS: WHO CARES ABOUT SPELLING?!? Just make sure they're not careless!! |
 Know My Dark 2005-10-11 . chapter 1Just dropping in to say that the title really reminds me of Robert Ludlum's book, The Icarus Agenda. |
| Raven O'Connor 2005-09-29 . chapter 11 Great chapter. Hope you post the next chapter soon. I can't stand the suspense! |
| Raven O'Connor 2005-09-09 . chapter 10 Great chapter. I'm still enjoying this story. Can't wait to find out what happens next! |
 Good-ol'-Scarecrow 2005-09-01 . chapter 9Very good stuff! Top-class writing - can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Raven O'Connor 2005-08-31 . chapter 9 Yikes, cliffhanger! Great chapter. I can't wait to read more. |
| Musicalmooky 2005-08-25 . chapter 8 WOW! It's been a while since I've read this particular adventure with Sheldon and Caleb. I'm so glad that you've decided to update it again. Please, please, please don't stop. I can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| Raven O'Connor 2005-06-21 . chapter 7 I'm glad you've decided to continue with this. It's been too long i've forgotten what had happened, so I had to read the last few chapters to remember back. can't wait to see what Eric is up to.
great chapter. |
| shadowhunter 2004-08-21 . chapter 7 ARGH
HOW COULD U STOP?
I WAS JUST GETTG INTO THE STORY!
CAN U PLEASE START WRITING? I'LL BE WAITING! |
| B Oots 2004-01-26 . chapter 7 I hope you continue the story. I need to findout, what happens to Dylan, after Sheldon finds Caleb. I also want to findout if the capture Eric. |
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