Hey hey!
Even being me(I dislike tragic poems), I thought that was great. High quality material we're workin with here.

My compliments to the chef.

Heya.

Is this Starry as in Starry who is also on II with a1 fanfiction? I was jus looking at who had me on their 'fave authors' list, and your name was up here, so figured wud check out some of ur stuff. This is the first of yours that I've read (I think so, anyway) and think is really good!

I like the repeated use of never be, never be right. Nice touch!

~Katie~

Very deep and meaningful, but I still must poke my nose in.
a couple of places you switched from the second to the third person (one to you) which took away a bit, also, in the ending lines of each stanza, as I was reading it, it sounded a bit awkward. Perhaps yet somehow you still know/it will never, never be right or know it will never/never be right.
Something like that anyway.

Very nice...I would def. use that for a school project if I were you!!
~Kristen

I like it, short and sweet, and i usually dont like short poems -_-; Anyways i like detail though i like to be able to see pictures from poems, maybe thats not what you wanted in this poem but i alwyas find adding the 5 senses really help develop poems.

WOW!

That was awesome! You'd better get an A+ on that project! I especially like the repeating last two lines and then the altered last two lines for the third stanza!

::gives you a gold star:: Excellent work! *^-^*

Wow! That is very beautiful! You must of put a lot of thought and time into it.
Use it in your schoolwork, I know for a fact that teachers like it when their students use original works of art.
Goe bless!
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